Thursday, April 21, 2011

Haikus

**Troublesome people
Cause war until the last breath
ending with all deaths.

**Brutus maybe strong
But others have opinions
tonight the fight, night is young.

**Cassius is boss
until he has a great loss
everything at cost.

**Underneath the best
Tonihgt they are all at rest
Romans put to test.


**Luvmunkey06**
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5 comments:

  1. Julius CaesarApril 22, 2011 at 10:05 PM

    Dang! That's good! Great poem! It sums up the play really well- and in haiku form too!!
    --Marguerite

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  2. Julius CaesarApril 25, 2011 at 7:39 PM

    Wow it seems like you took a great deal of thought into these Haikus:))
    -Cassieus

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  3. Julius CaesarApril 26, 2011 at 11:19 AM

    I really like how you tell the story, make it rhyme and put it in hiaku for. good job :)

    -OVERLORD

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  4. Julius CaesarApril 26, 2011 at 12:28 PM

    These are great! I really like the second one (: Really powerful!!

    ~HippoLover1

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  5. Julius CaesarApril 28, 2011 at 7:23 PM

    These is one of the BEST HAIKUS i ever saw !!!

    -chocho

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